I entered the laboratory one rainy afternoon. The good doctor had set up his trophies in varying shapes, sizes and colors in front of the window, but I was more focused on the incredible machine in the center of the room.
Written in giant red letters above it, “DO NOT TOUCH LASER!”
Curiosity saw me reach for it.
“Don’t,” the doctor growled.
I shook my head. “I was just stretching.”
He sighed. “That’s exactly what the last offender said,” he said, pulling me and pointing towards the derelict ruins of the property across the lake, “when that happened.”
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Dear Melony,
I think I’d take the good doctor’s advice and not touch. 😉 Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle YFBM
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Hehe I think so too! But lasers are so cool. 😂
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Don’t touch is sometimes like an invitation to touch… like moths that burn themselves in the fire we tend to do…
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Haha exactly. It’s only natural to be curious. hehe
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Yeah don’t touch and the other one is “wet paint,” my cousin always insists on touching to check that it is indeed wet. Then, when the paint’s smudged and her fingers are covered, she says, “Oh it is wet.”
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Hahah Sounds like something I would do!
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I always look on ‘Wet Paint’ as an instruction.
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I like the denial in your story. So human! Well done.
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The whole curiosity killed the cat, but in this case…a little more. Watch out! Good job!
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Just a tad more. I hope there weren’t any neighbors around when it happened. Haha
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Or they got a good show!
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LOL, curiosity probably killed the poor cat hiding in that building across the river. Nicely done, made me smile.
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Hehe thanks! I’d imagine so!
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There’s a lesson learned.
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Lasers seem to be getting a bad press at the moment, so I agree with the good doctor, don’t touch, but a notice saying that is always temptation for me, which you so well describe
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Thanks! hehe I love lasers. I just think more safety measures than a sign would be on order here. 🙂
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I was afraid the last offender had perished!
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Haha Half the time the story would be all doom and gloom, but I wanted a laugh this time instead. 🙂
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Amusing piece, nicely done.
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Thanks! Everyone needs a little laugh sometimes. 🙂
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oops
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Follow the good doctor’s instructions… please! Nice one
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Whoops. Don’t touch is too tempting. I wonder why the government hasn’t been there yet and asked for the plans for his laser gun. Fun story.
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I was asking myself that same question. Not to mention why has police confiscated it for property damage. Maybe it’s because of the sign. 😂
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That was fun! Don’t touch definitely is an invitation to touch… Humans at our best!
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hehehe Indeed! I want to touch it even after realizing I could be disintegrated.
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Oh this one was fun! “I was just stretching” made me giggle out loud and I could actually see him pull her across to the window! Well done!!
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hehe Thanks! That’s what every writer wants to hear! 😁
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You know what curiosity did to the cat. Glad the doctor was there to stave off another burst; although I feel like he maybe needs better safety mechanism than a tempting sign!
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I agree 100%! hehe
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This made me laugh. Well done
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Love it! Wonderful. Something light and funny in contrast to the dark stuff that seems to be emerging this week.
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Hehehe thank you! It is a photo that evokes a lot of darkness on its own, so I thought a contrast was in order. ☺
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Wonderfully written. Love it. (as I wickedly laugh).
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Left me chuckling! Well done!
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