Lavender sheets,
Tiny princess onesies,
Remind me of you.
I can still feel
Your soft skin,
Hear your sweet laugh.
I imagine you now
In vermilion fabric
Wearing a white corsage.
I missed so much,
Lost,
Chasing demons
In spoons
And needles.
Renowned Writer Extraordinaire – in my mind!
A sad tale told so well in 42 words.
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Thank you! 😀
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this is so beautifully written – the way you string words together is just woah. time really flies and kids grow up too fast
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Thank you for the kind words! It really means a lot to me!
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I have to admit I don’t know who is sixteen in this story – mother or daughter. Still, a sad result for both.
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Thanks, Cyn. The daughter is now 16. I tried to hint at it with white corsage signifying prom. Sorry it wasn’t clear again. 😯
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That’s what I thought, but I let myself get confused.
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So sad, for both mother and daughter
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Indeed! Drugs cause far too many broken homes. 😟
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Love those last three lines–for the deftness of the image and the way they put a sudden, chilling spin on what was looking like a sweet, nostalgic story.
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Thanks! That really means a lot to me!
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Beautiful blend of nostalgia and tragedy. sigh… not happy but lovely writing.
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Perfectly said, Shailaja.
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Thanks, Arden! 😄
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That’s high praise coming from you! Thank you so much!
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So much fit into so little…quite moving. Nicely done!
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Thank you! 42 words can be so hard when the idea you have is easily 150. 😅
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Addiction steals time from so many.
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It does. I feel sorry for them both. 😳
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What are you trying to do to me? First all …awww…and then like… damn. I didn’t see it coming. In fact, I was in such denial I imagined a baby spoon but then couldn’t fit in needle and I had to accept. Well done.
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Thanks, Tara! Sorry to be a downer. Lol but so glad it had affected everyone similarly
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Melony, this is wonderful. I love how you lull us into believing this is a simple “my, how you’ve grown” story from mother to child and then let it grow into something else entirely. This is my favorite piece of your so far, hands down. Really, really well done.
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Wow! Thank you so much. That is high praise coming from you. 😀
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