Alice stood at the doorway. Her blank stare made it look like she was peering into the void.
The room was covered in her mother’s favourite flowers in shades of yellow. In the center of the vast chamber, iron and oak was a physical reminder of the darkness that lied ahead.
Up until this moment, she had allowed herself the delusion that it wasn’t real.
But now, she couldn’t escape it. She clutched at her heart and choked back a sob. Then with a violent shake of her head, Alice crashed to the carpet and whispered a curse, “Fuck you, cancer.”
This was written as part of the weekly Friday Fictioneers challenge. Give it a try sometime! You won’t regret it. It is run by the wonderful Rochelle, who comments on almost every story that is posted. Additionally, the community is wonderful and always provides great feedback! It’s simple, really. A photo is provided every week, and you just write a 100 word or less story that comes to mind from the prompt. This week’s story is near to everyone’s heart, and I hope I did it justice.
As always, thanks for reading! 🙂
Yes, F it!
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You paint a poignant moment, that one where you have to admit that the horrible thing is real. Very touching.
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Thank you very much. That means a lot! 🙂
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I add my heartfelt F to that. Very touching, and true story.
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the last sentence summed it all. well done.
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I share Alice’s sentiment.
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I think we all do. It’s hard to meet a person who hasn’t said it before in some way. Thanks for reading!
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Dear Melony,
With a capital F. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle!
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Powerful story! Love all of the descriptions leading up to the ending. As a cancer survivor, I can relate well to this 🙂
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Wow. Congratulations! You must be a very strong person indeed. I’m glad my story could speak to you.
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Thank you 🙂 And yes, your story spoke to me in a wonderful way 🙂
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A difficult and heart-wrenching moment beautifully expressed.
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