Whispers and hushed giggles woke Charmaine from her slumber.
There was a time when no one dared enter her property, but kids these days had no respect.
She marched down the stairs and listened. The brazen pair were laughing!
“Thieves!” Charmaine cried, bursting through the door.
Two boys suddenly stopped at her gate. Their pockets bulged from their pilfering.
Before either of them could speak, Charmaine snapped her fingers, and they vanished in a puff of smoke. As it cleared, two toads are revealed.
Charmaine grumbled, “I really oughta get rid of that gummy bear tree.”
“Ribbit!” they agreed.
(As always, this is from this week’s Friday Fictioneers photo prompt challenge. Every week, Rochelle, the grand poobah of all things flash fiction, posts a photo and offers a challenge of 100 words or less. It’s good fun, and there are a lot of fantastic stories that come out of it! It’s also a great way to meet writers with your same interests! And also get some great feedback that might help improve your writing.)
Dear Melony,
Where does one find seeds for a gummy bear tree. Cute story. A bit of crit…the third to the last paragraph that starts, “Before either of them…” has a bit of tense confusion, going from past to present and back to past.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hehe thanks! I edited that part so much that I missed that. Fixed, I think. 😄
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I’m well familiar with the curse of the backspace key, Melony. It’s tripped me up many times. 😉
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Entertaining tale.
But still a bit of tense confusion with ‘clears’, I think.
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Thanks! Fixed! 😄
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Cute story. It seems someone forgot to warn those two boys. A lot of people would like to know how to plant a gummy bear tree. Well done, Melony. 😀 — Suzanne
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Thanks, Suzanne! I’m in a whimsical mood this week. I had a huge craving for gummy bears after writing this, and I still haven’t filled that desire. Hehe
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Ha… never pilfer from a witch… at least she doesn’t like roasted boys..
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She was more annoyed than angry. Just teaching them all a lesson, I think.
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Gummy bear tree – wonderful idea. Changing little vandals into toads… even better.
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I agree! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Nice twist to the topic. Thanks for smile.
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Hehe You’re most welcome! Thanks for reading! 😀
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Heh, this is great. Did these boys learn nothing from Hänsel and Gretel? Pilfering a gummy bear tree… tsk. I want seeds, too, please.
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I’d love a gummy bear tree too, but Charmaine won’t tell me where she got it from. Sneaky witch. Hehe
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Haha…very cute!
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Hehe thanks! 😄
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Lovely story! I wonder how many toads are leaping around her place already.
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Probably far too many! Silly children! hehe
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Most witches plant candy to lure children in the old stories. Seems like she accomplished her task.
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Hahah yeah. She did in her youth, but now she’s just tired and wants to be left alone with her gummies. 😂
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That’s the problem with gummie trees and skittles bushes unless you cut them down they keep attracting the critters.
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Ooh – what a nasty little fairy story. I don’t like Charlotte.
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How mean is she to not share her gummy bears! I mean c’mon. That’s cruel to have such a tree and not expect to get visitors…
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Takes me back to scrumping as a kid. We worried the houses were inhabited by witches and worse.
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Didn´t expect that ending, it´s a witch! Fun story,was a very nice read.
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Playful and fun, Melony. Nice job!
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